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...Is what we call father/son bonding. :D

[Edit] Updated it to JPG.

So, This is my contest entry for WM's latest contest. :D I know, the fire and haze don't look very good but hey, it's my first time. This is is Talon, my char, and Rapier, *wolfyrose623's char. If I can't put someone else's char in the pic, then I'll Draw something new. But yeah, this is father and son. I don't think Rapier even knows his son is alive again... But anyways, Yeah, I like this though it has a lot of faults.

Rapier is using Dark Haze
Talon is using inferno (it's supposed to light his whole body on fire but I decided I wanted to still see Rapier and Talon so... I tweaked it a little bit Even though you can't really see Rapier... I had to tweak Dark Hase a little so you could at least see him a bit.)
They're both using Lightning which explains the lightning in the backgrounds. Lots and lots of lightning.

DON'T LOOK AT THE CLOUDS, THEY SUCK!! IT WAS MY FIRST TIME DOING THEM TOO!! I tried a lot of new things. :D

(Inferno issupposed to light the user's whole body on fire but I decided I wanted to still see Rapier and Talon so... I tweaked it a little bit Even though you still can't really see Rapier... I had to tweak Dark Hase a little so you could at least see him a bit.)

I used a reference (pssh, I wouldn't be able to pull this off on my own!!) My apologies if the owner is here on DA, I'll take it down and re-do it if he/she wants. :)

Rapier *wolfyrose623
Talon & Art Me! No stealing!
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CalSlater Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Professional Filmographer
Wow, intense. I like it.
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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aluekasivu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Great job!! The bottom is def. Rapier.the fire is all going one direction, but he is standing up and fire is usually wild and goes all directions. So a little more texture in the fire. :-) but all in all, great job!
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. I'll work on that. 8D
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aluekasivu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Np
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wolfyrose623 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is really nice! Though I don't think Rapier would ever get pinned xD but still! I like it lol

The fire is nice, but its more transparent at the top (As alli stated) and all the way through really just more so at the top. Just keep practicing and eventually things like clouds and this mist will be easier to draw =)

Talon's gums are too large, not that much would be showing on it. Though I do commend you for making them show xD They look like they are sort of uneven, if you pull up the front in just a bit I think that would even that up there. Otherwise unless you want me to pick it appart the anatomy on Talon looks really good =) You have improved in bounds with anatomy as of late.

Rapier's back right leg looks a bit strange, but good O,o not sure how to explain it to be honest xD however one thing that does stick out is his missing back left leg which I can't see. His leg should be visible given his position, but once again its sort of a trivial thing that probably wouldn't be noticed if it wasn't looked for lol.

Overall its a good piece xD It makes me want to draw a return piece of Rapier showing this little runt who the real boss is xDDD
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yeah... Talon has maybe two seconds before he gets it. xP Then he's as good as gone.

I hope those things get easier... those things are freaking hard. xD I'll remember transparent for the next time. :)

Thanks, I've been studying canine anatomy though I seem to always make legs too short or too long. -_- I'll work on the snarl next time. :-/ I'm not very good with muzzles like that. Never done that before.

As for Rapier's hind leg, I tried to make it look right but... Just kinda gave up. I drew the other leg in the sketch.... but I guess I forgot it in the final thing. :(

Thanks for the help. It helps a lot. I think it is helping me improve more then anything else. :) You should do a return piece. xD I'm interested in seeing what Rapier has in store for him. He should teach His boy a lesson. :D
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wolfyrose623 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They will just keep practicing =D That's really the only way to get better =)

And no problem I might draw today or tomorrow not sure yet because we are going to DC here in the next few days lol
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Will do, Boss. :D

I liked your contest entry for WM. You're awesome at backgrounds. xD Unlike muah. I'll get there eventually. I'm determined. DC sounds like fun! Gonna visit any monuments?
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wolfyrose623 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks xD and Yeah it takes much practice and we visited a lot of monuments today xD it was fun.
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fatalitycomplex Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it, Dio. The expressions are really good on both of them, I like the snarls. If you want some tips on the fire, I'd say add little wisps here and there and blur them a lot because that's sort of what real fire does. And try giving the fire a little opacity near the top ^^ As for the actual animals, the only thing I see off anatomy wise is Rapier's hind paw. And maybe his shoulders could have a bit more bunch in them to make his legs appear longer? They seem a bit short to me. But overall, AWESOME job!!!
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, I told you I wasn't going to do very well with the fire. -_- Damn fire. His hind paw was... not cooperating so I gave up and left it. As for his short legs, I was extreamly confused. I hate mixing breeds together. He's not a pure wolf so... I really wasn't sure which traits I should give him from wolf, and which to give him from his other breed.
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fatalitycomplex Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see. Yeah but huskies have long legs as well xD
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yeah... I kinda mixed up his breed. xD
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fatalitycomplex Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see lol
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rayraynay Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
scary o.o but good job! :)
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:) Did you like the fire? Or do you think I should try something new?
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rayraynay Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
I like the fire! it looks sweet and adds more intensity to the picture :)
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SXxIntoxicatedxX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. :)
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rayraynay Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
no problemo!
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